The Beginning of the Paper

This week we had to write a thesis to begin our opening argument for the research paper. However, I did not do to well on my, but I decided to jump right back on the horse and write a new one that night. Now I have a more presentable argument and feel much more confident in my answer. I also found some research on my new argument. In addition to writing a thesis I edited my proposal as well, with the suggestions the board gave me.